This space, barren, quivers in the vast
nothingness that has penetrated it. Unspoken words linger afloat in the cavity
that trails untraced from there to nowhere. Miniscule crumbs left sprawled
across the coffee table. Drapes hung low and depressed in the parched summer
humidity, with seams tattered and undone. The floor creaks with patience for
the foot that never sets foot upon it. Windows left ajar, wide and welcoming to
the forgotten beyond. Paint cracked and peeling across walls stained with the
mute passing of time, withered and pasty accumulating along the edges of the
room, like termite-ridden dusting, sans the termites. For, even they have left
abandoned this place. The leather sofa sits idly in a corner, askew from the
line of the antique Persian rug beneath it, its upholstery frayed with a
dullness whose cause is suspect. A broken floor lamp slumps with its wiring
exposed, and its shades torn and discolored A heel-less stiletto boot here, a
discarded iPhone there; trinkets and follies without ownership and purpose.
I miss the cacophony of conversation, the hoi polloi of discourse, the unabashed
wanton over-sharing I miss the brilliance of anonymous writers, and the comfort
of writing explored in its most raw, unedited, no-holds-barred incarnations. A
space that used to be instilled with the spirit of freedom of speech, now lies
still in the absence of use.
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And those of us who remain still, wither, with the passing of time.
@JM Hey there. Thanks for visiting. It's been a while. I do hope we don't wither away, though. Exploratory writing is detrimental to my wellbeing. And sanity.
Hi! I found your blog through misterhubs' page. read all his entries and i must say, lagi ko inaabangan comments mo.
i love your writing style. effective imagery. vivid description. reminds me of my favorite book, jane eyre but with a modern twist.
i'll try to read all your entries. cheers!
@Ivan Thanks! I appreciate, that you appreciate my writing. I'd like to believe that I'm more of a David Foster Wallace, but Charlotte Brontë is just as much a compliment. Thanks for visiting, and hope you enjoy my entries, as much as you did my comments. Cheers!
The scene depicted here makes me think of what happened to the people who once gathered there. Had they lived fully? I'm afraid time can rob things of their brilliance, yet in the same way it could elicit beauty that is only possible with its passage.
@Ivan That was exactly what I aimed for, describing a milieu out of its time, or rather after its time. Thanks for visiting, it's been a while sir.
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